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I Spy comp - what do you spy?
Replies: 19Last Post June 16 10:21pm by brookie chookie23
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2601 up for grabs and only 17 days to go!

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I spy a gift in a box
And one or two colorful round marble rocks
I spy a timepiece where seconds tick past
A birthday reminder,
A gun that can blast
I spy a teacup the color of the sky
And some tightly woven thread—
There are things I spy.

I spy a spring
Wound up in a coil
A soldier perched in foreign soil
A vacuum creator
A music machine
A letter on which a mirror does lean

I spy a clip with no paper in its grasp
A clothespin alone with nothing to clasp
Five painted white dots
On a tiny green square
Some dull silver coins
One needle from a pair

I spy a muddle of things, it seems
Things that you'd only pair up in your dreams
Like a colorful, rotating merry-go-round
Where objects are scattered onto the ground


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If there's anything to do
If there's any other way
I'll do anything for you.


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Here's another I made:

I spy a puzzle of wits
Plastic to kill
And a needle that knits
I spy a dot and five more
And a slip of paper to help tie the score
I spy a child's doll's toy
A plastic blue creature the shape of a boy
I spy the fortune of your birth
And the threader of a needle
With words in its mirth.


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I spy, with my little eye:
an 'eek' coming from a fish,
a cup of tea to set on your dish,
A clip with three squares,
and a magic man of affairs.
A golden trinket of a number twenty-one,
and a bolded s-u-n.
A whale of a man,
and, last but not least, a reflector to tan.


1:next to the clothespin
2:the cup
3:to the left of 'Mudbricks Australia'
4:letters in ..tion... .outh ..eek at ..s.p (next to clothespin)
5:the paperclip on the 3 soduku squares
6:wizard
7:army guy on whale
8:mirror

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Ok folks, results are in!

I've decided to split the points in 3 places because there were lots of great entries and giving all the points to one person wouldn't be right.
First Place, earning 1414 points: Khadgar - Of the clues I did use, a lot of them came from or were inspired by your entry.
Second Place, earning 800 points: xoxo1234 - Again, a few of my clues came from your entry.
Third  Place, earning 500 points: NoNoNora383 - Although I didn't use any of your entry in the clues I ended up using, your entries were still impressive.

Post edited at 10:49 pm on June 16, 2008 by brookie chookie23

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