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Writing a Letter
Replies: 6Last Post Aug. 29 5:41am by ElephantStone
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I'm going to write a letter to Catherine. Only I don't write letters and I'm very bad at expressing how I feel, so I need help. I guess the point of this letter is to sort everything out and tell her how special I think she is and how I want to be fiends again.

I don't want to look like some psychopath who's crazy in love with her or that my world revolves around her. I don't want it to be a love letter either...

I want it to be something that will touch her...shes not a slut, shes quiet and shes clever. Sweet things will get to her.

I'm afraid of one thing though. Once I hand her that letter...its out of my hands and anyone can see it...

Also I don't want to hand her a novel, just something short...and I want to hand it to her with confidence of what has been written in there...

This wont be done over night, I ant to put a couple of months effort into it, b/c its unlikely Ill see her for a few weeks unless I go looking for her.

So, who wants to help?

And do you think its a good idea if I make another topic, so that anyone who wants to help can read whats happened between Catherine and I?

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Well you said you want it simple, yet meaningful correct?

How about first starting off by apologizing for the way you have/had been acting and say that you changed and are a better person now. Next, just say that you think she is special and would really appreciate if she'd consider you two being friends again because you'd really like to have her back in your life. Say simple things that show you care. I'm pretty sure you know how to not go over board.

Is that good or would you like it a bit longer?

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Well, if you asked me what I was apologising for, I dont know. I havent done anything wrong, or I dont think so anyway...

...i genuinely dont know what to say, cos im very very bad at this.

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Ok, well I guess I need some background info first. I thought that you did something causing her to not want to be associated with you anymore. I don't know. I have read a lot of your topics, but I may be missing something.

Just say that you think she's a really nice person who is super sweet/special and that you'd like to be friends with her. Can you kind of lengthen that out some? I mean letters don't need to be too long to get the message across to someone. Sometimes just short and simple will do the job.

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Okay tried. I really wish I had a lot fo people helping now, because this seems so bad. There is no way I could hand this to anyone:

I don't know if you care, in fact you probably don't, because it has been a long time. It’s been a very long time. But not so long that I've forgotten who you are and how amazing it was to talk to you. I don’t know how things between you and me have ended up the way they are, but I want it to stop. I want to be friends with you again Catherine Green, because you're one of the nicest, funniest and most caring people I've ever met.

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Aww that's actually really good! If I were her I'd find that sweet and a simple letter asking for friendship.

I would just fix one small thing: (Just going to quote your whole letter and put in bold what I fixed)


I don't know how you feel about me since it's been a very long time, but not so long that I've forgotten who you are and how amazing it was to talk to you. I don't know how things between you and me have ended up the way they are, but I want it to stop. I want to be friends with you again Catherine Green, because you're one of the nicest, funniest and most caring people I've ever met.


There, what do you think about that?




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Thanks for the edit, it has improved it. But I just....dont like it. It just doesnt seem like it could work and looks so pathetic.

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