We had to read the same book for our summer assignment last year, so message me if you need help. (I had to do an essay on the ambigous factor as well.) Honestly, I think it needs some work. Make it longer and add more details. There should be at least 3 more sentences, to touch upon what the body paragraphs will unravel.
Also, you should look up some synonyms for the word character.
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grow up, stop acting like children, stop crying for attention.