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( Heart92 )
Be My Sunshine
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Pain is love
Sometimes the things that feel so good are pain,
Love is the greatest pain of all,
When we try to reframe from it
We are bond to fall.
I'd rather hurt from love
Then that sweet pain at all,
It feels like dozens of daggers piercing my heart
when it's broke.
But in the beginning of love I was nervous
And had lumps in my throat
I had butterflies that wouldn't go away,
But sadly their soft fluttering have been led astray,
My heart always loves him,
I wish he would say the same,
Pain is love,
You have to accept it when you play its game. -Heart92 Post edited at 6:15 pm on Sep. 6, 2008 by Heart92
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The sun may shine and the rain will clear out
Shine brighter then the sun and be the one that brightens up your day
Don't loose hope when the sun goes down
Because the night just brings another day ♥
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6:02 pm on Sep. 6, 2008 | Joined Nov. 2006 | 561 Days Active
Join to learn more about Heart92 California, United States | Straight Female | 19803 Posts | 26635 Points
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snowgo
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wow that was pretty amazing. you should say bound to fall tho.
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LEONIDOS
Quality Control Engineer
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your a warrior poet
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GIVE THEM NOTHING BUT TAKE FROM THEM EVERYTHING
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MakingaDifference001
Dairy Product Addict
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I really like it but I disagree with the message.
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So put your hand in the hand of mine and together we
shall walk through this valley of the shadow of death.
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hooray for rootbeer
Visionary
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A think some of the phrases are rather cliche, but you've got something good if you can use a little more poetic element. Keep it up.
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they buy and they sell and they sell all their trash to each other
but they're sick of it all, and they're bankrupt on selling
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KatieKaBOOM
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I love this,... you have great talent!
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.!Katie KaBOOM!.
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